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Your name wraps its way around my cerebellum,
wheedling its way through,
coalescing with your voice,
as it leaves an imprint on my hippocampus.

Your name has engraved itself into my heart,
piercing through the aorta,
playing with my heart strings,
as it leaves footprints on my coronary artery.

Your name,
your voice,
my head,
my heart.

How much more do you think I can take?

© 2012
Sorry about the title, I was trying to be witty. ;P

Surprisingly, a short love poem. Shocking, isn't it? ;)

*coy smile*
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thc19 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The last sentence captivates me the most. And I like the idea of this poem. ^_^
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad. :)
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
:w00t: LOVE! :heart:
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwe, thanks! :D :heart:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
My pleasure! :la: :heart:
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Clever!

But this is an excellent poem! It flowed beautifully!
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. xD

Good to know. :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
I enjoy this. Very much so. And reminds me of this line I once thought of, but haven't used yet. It was...uhm..."One needs a brain to have a heart, and a heart to have a brain" both metaphorically and literally! XD
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, that's awesome. :)
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