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Your name wraps its way around my cerebellum,
wheedling its way through,
coalescing with your voice,
as it leaves an imprint on my hippocampus.

Your name has engraved itself into my heart,
piercing through the aorta,
playing with my heart strings,
as it leaves footprints on my coronary artery.

Your name,
your voice,
my head,
my heart.

How much more do you think I can take?

© 2012
Sorry about the title, I was trying to be witty. ;P

Surprisingly, a short love poem. Shocking, isn't it? ;)

*coy smile*
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thc19 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The last sentence captivates me the most. And I like the idea of this poem. ^_^
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad. :)
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
:w00t: LOVE! :heart:
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwe, thanks! :D :heart:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
My pleasure! :la: :heart:
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Clever!

But this is an excellent poem! It flowed beautifully!
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. xD

Good to know. :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
I enjoy this. Very much so. And reminds me of this line I once thought of, but haven't used yet. It was...uhm..."One needs a brain to have a heart, and a heart to have a brain" both metaphorically and literally! XD
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, that's awesome. :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Student Writer
I enjoy it XD
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha good to know :)
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student Writer
:nod:
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ramekinkin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) i love it.
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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ramekinkin Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
youre welcome. :)
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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phira115 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was faint in the heart...I am dieing. Beautiful :D romantically interested hmmmmm who is it :eyes: XD
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aweee. Don't die! xD Thanks. :)

Oh, in a lovely person. ;)
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phira115 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay then, since you said not to I won't XD Welcome :D
Mmh~ XD
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha xD
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phira115 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3
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featherback Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous flow, and I adore the story! :iconlainloveplz:
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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TTM77 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i hope it's me, if not....WHAT!!! YOU ARE CHEATING. :D
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WHAT I'D NEVER DO THAT!! xD
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TTM77 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
what.. now u saying u don't even love me? this si gettong worse. lol
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I know!
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TTM77 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:tears:
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD :hug:
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:iconttm77:
TTM77 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
now u r sending mix messages.
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed I am! xD
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reflectionsinwater Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful flow and rhythm!
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, it means a lot. ^^
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Neat idea. :)
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
You're welcome. :)
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Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I always knew you loved me :heart:
I love you, too! :iconlainloveplz:
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH I KNOW! IT'S MEANT TO BE! EMBRACE ME!
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: YESS
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:iconloveislightblue:
Loveislightblue Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH YES. :D :huggle: xD
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