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Set sail towards the golden horizon,
catching the summer's breeze,
Coasting along the belt of Orion,
barely skimming Canes Venatici.
Sails maneuver through the stars,
in still waters they tread,
pushing through the sand, leaving scars,
in constellations already dead.

Set sail towards the skies,
filled with heavenly figures,
the sea reflected in your eyes,
where the starlight lingers.
Sails catching moon beams,
leaving trails in their wake,
the world is only but a dream,
when you're half awake.

Set sail towards banks of paradise,
let the winds overtake you,
dip your feet into the moonlight,
let the pale light bathe you.
Sails left to wander space,
as your eyes grow weary,
a half-smile upon your face,
as you finally fall asleep.

© 2012
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A request for :iconfeatherback:

I kind of like where this one went, not at all what I had in mind when I wrote the first two lines, but...nice.

I hope you enjoy. ^^
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Mood: Love ~winterkate Jul 20, 2012  Student Writer
Omigosh! You said you didn't see the ending of this one coming but I thought it wrapped up perfectly. Such a lovely rhyme scheme and gorgeous descriptions! This was beautiful and I especially loved the first stanza.
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~Loveislightblue Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh haha, what I meant was that I started off the poem with the topic of "Sailboats" so I didn't really think I'd end up going into space with this one...xD Thank you very very much, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! :D
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~winterkate Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
You're really welcome, I really did :)
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~Loveislightblue Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great. :)
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~winterkate Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome!
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~Loveislightblue Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. :)
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~winterkate Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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~Loveislightblue Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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~Contradictory55 Jul 17, 2012  Student Writer
=) Beautiful imagery!
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~Loveislightblue Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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